Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
It is true that research information play a vital role in many industry. While some people think that it is necessary to public results of scientific research, business and academic world, I would argue that it should be resticted with some crucial information.
On the one hand, there are two inportant reasons why academic information should be share to everyone. Firstly, in the developed countries have numerous of students who cannot afford to pay money for acquiring knowlege. Therefore, they tend to use free information as a available sources to server for their study. Sharing information is a good way can help poor students can gain knowledge and then they will contribute to develop country. Secondly, public information create oppourtunity for authors discuss the research materials and results toghether and they might finding out new invention. For example, my university have a website which public all scientific research of students and every students can give opinion and suggest below any research they feel interested in.
On the other hand, I think that there are some limitation shold be applied with vital inforamtion. Firstly, with the valuable information, the author must hard working for a long time, so it is suitable that they should be paid some fees for their effort. In other words, the research with high value will have particular affect with life, hence if other people want to use that information, they should be paid some money to ensure their research have valuable results. Secondly, in some countries, people so not have aware with pay fee for materials of other authors, so the percentage of plagraism research are increasing nowadays. Therefore, it is essential to limit the number of free information to create the awareness for people when use other research materials.
In conclusion, in spite of sharing information is a good way to help people have materials for their work, it seems to me that some crucial information should be paid some fee for the effort of author.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun industry seems to be countable; consider using: 'many industries'.
Suggestion: many industries
...search information play a vital role in many industry. While some people think that it is nec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shared'?
Suggestion: shared
...sons why academic information should be share to everyone. Firstly, in the developed ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e, they tend to use free information as a available sources to server for their s...
^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'source'?
Suggestion: source
... to use free information as a available sources to server for their study. Sharing info...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ts toghether and they might finding out new invention. For example, my university have a webs...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ch with high value will have particular affect with life, hence if other people want to use...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11480362538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73131165261 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498489425982 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1849668552 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280050041214 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110526100494 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614162977198 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203216227966 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377135062718 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 59, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun industry seems to be countable; consider using: 'many industries'.
Suggestion: many industries
...search information play a vital role in many industry. While some people think that it is nec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shared'?
Suggestion: shared
...sons why academic information should be share to everyone. Firstly, in the developed ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e, they tend to use free information as a available sources to server for their s...
^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'source'?
Suggestion: source
... to use free information as a available sources to server for their study. Sharing info...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ts toghether and they might finding out new invention. For example, my university have a webs...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ch with high value will have particular affect with life, hence if other people want to use...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11480362538 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73131165261 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498489425982 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1849668552 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280050041214 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110526100494 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614162977198 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203216227966 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377135062718 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.