In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is true that companies tend to invest in development advertising to ensure that their products are the most mordern in variety approach. There are many reasons behind this trend and in my opinion, this innovation include both advantage and disadvantage.
On the one hand, with the high competition in the market, creating the perception of consumers that their products were developed is an effective way increase the number of buyers. In other words, customers is one of the vital factors to create the strengthness for the companies when compare with competitors. Therefore, when consumers recognized products of one company are innovated to become more modern, they will interested in that products and the percentage of consumers buy the products will go up. For instance, in Vietnam, there are numerous of channel for advertising company's products. As the results, Vietnam companies invariably popularised their products are new and special to create the benefits when compete with other companies.
I argue that this development brings both perks and drawbacks for companies. In terms of advantages, this approach to advertise the products will ehance the reputation both company and product, hence create a large of number consumers for the company. However, if the companies advertise their prosucts are new frequently, customers will fell the previous the product they bought are older quickly, hence they might be unbelieve in the quality of that product.
In conclusion, businesses want to introduce that their products are new to customers in different methods and this trend bring many benefits for them, however, it also includes some drawbacks might be affected to comapnies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 419, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...ovated to become more modern, they will interested in that products and the percentage of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39473684211 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83577536345 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7246520124 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245138662453 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102974078044 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572121398305 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169382939058 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190847354803 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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