The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportion of people in Australia who exercised on a regular basis in 2010, according to age and gender.
Overall, women exercised more than men. It is also noticeable that boys aged 15 to 24 and women aged 45 to 54 accounted for the highest percentage of the total people who did regular exercise.
In 2010, over 50% of women aged 35 to 64 exercised regularly, while the figures for men in the same age groups were much lower, ranging from 39.5% to 45.1%. The 15 to 24 age group was the only group in which the proportion of males taking regular exercise was higher than that of females, 52% and 47.7% respectively.
Turning to the two remaining groups, 48.9% women at the age between 25 and 34 exercised on a regular basis, whereas the figure for the opposite sex in the same age group was only 42.2%. Men and women aged 65 or older who did regular physical activity accounted for a similar percentage, at around 47%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40366972477 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26930272789 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481651376147 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3480368312 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 5.23603664747 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141972135484 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862406259179 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616186317967 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1322545362 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518879458604 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.