Most people agree that money can not be happiness.
Why is happiness difficult to define ? How can people achieve happiness
Majority of people consider that happiness does not depend on money. For many individuals it is hard to comprehend their happiness, the reason for that is every person has distinctive personality according to their age. On the one hand, happiness is very tough word and it could be difficult to be understood by everyone. Currently every human being has different mind and outlook to words to life regarding to their age it means that they accept the feeling of being happy differently. For example, young generation find happiness from spending time with their friends, having enough money and travelling. As for, people who are around 35-50 years believe that it depends on their health, education and developing outlook by this way they are willing to succeed on their career. Older people think that health is the most important factor in their life, for them health lead to happy life. On the other hand, everyone can be happy but people who are open minded usually be happy easily they enjoy from every single moment or situation in their life. In order to be positive, they should be outgoing and have to concentrate on positive sides of life by avoiding things that are inferior such as pessimists who are trigger in a negative way. By the way of illustration, people who have to teach themselves to be glad for everything which was given in life. To conclude, in my opinion happiness may be acquired by being graceful and thinking positively every single time, as our life tend to consist of small moments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1223, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rior such as pessimists who are trigger in a negative way. By the way of illustration, people who...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, regarding, so, as for, for example, such as, by the way, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83076923077 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54086133651 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9462397036 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.181818182 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300628874002 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137636216437 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957966708489 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300628874002 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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