Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the development of society, protecting the environment is one of the most important problems. Only governments and large companies are not enough. It needs both of them and individuals. Everyone is responsible for improving the environment.
Firstly, everyone needs to know what they are protecting. the environment is everything around you that you can see and feel it. So, the individual has an important role in protecting their environment. It is not too hard to do, only a few simple activities that you can do at your home such as throwing rubbish in right place, not littering. They are just some small things, but if everyone does those things, you will see the enormous change to your environment.
In addition, assistance by the government is also necessary, but it just helps people know what to do and people will do what they want to protect their life. The Government made laws that force companies have to protect the environment. But there are still a lot of companies that break the law, they waste the river and dirt that strongly affect the quality of life of thousands of people. Thus, I think that the government and companies also have an important role in improving the environment.
In conclusion, government, companies, and individuals play an important role in improving the environment because it is a long process and needs the efforts of many people to achieve it
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...needs to know what they are protecting. the environment is everything around you th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, thus, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96186440678 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91339058976 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521186440678 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3920957296 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6428571429 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299399868963 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957657283677 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800246892927 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160390268361 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546086815027 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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