Write a letter to your local council complaining that the street where you live has become dirty lately.
In your letter, you should tell:
· why it is happening
· what problems it could cause
· what your suggestions are.
Dear Sir,
From past few weeks, our neighborhood has become an unhygienic locality due to poor government cleaners that you have assigned in our area. Therefore, I am writing this letter for the necessary actions required to be taken to resolve the litter conditions on our streets.
We have only two cleaning workers in our locality which is unable to provide a clean and healthier condition in our society. Due to the less number of workers, litters thrown by people remain on the road for days in our locality. Besides, we do not have dustbins installed outside in our area which is one of the requirement to thrown garbage's that are produced by locals.
Due to unhealthy and non-cleanliness environment, there are a several number of problems that could cause deteriorating effects by spreading of diseases like cholera, dengue and malaria in our area.
To resolve this ongoing problem, I could suggest you to installed dustbins on the every ends of our street, so that outsiders and locals can throw litters in dustbins. Plus, increase the cleaning staff in our area, so that they can maintain a clean and hygienic environment in our colony.
I am hoping to receive a quick resolution on this complaint letter.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, From past few weeks, our neighborhood ha...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
...on-cleanliness environment, there are a several number of problems that could cause deteriorat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05238095238 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79278711397 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0599600532 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12345693374 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558412251688 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510167907895 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635459502824 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312378061737 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.