In this contemporary society, more and more youngsters from prosperous nations are spending a short time getting engaged in voluntary projects including teaching or constructing houses for communities in impoverished nations. As far as I concerned, this issue is caused by several reasons and I strongly believe that both young generation and the community will benefit from that.
First and foremost, it is possibly said that two main factors leading to this phenomenon are humanity and to enhance rewarding experience. To begin with, the first reason is that some youngsters from affluent powerhouse have compassionate lifestyle and these people want to contribute something helpful to disadvantaged countries. Hence, they decide to do charity work in order to make their life more meaningful. Additionally, joining in voluntary activities can give the youth a better opportunity to boost rewarding experience, which they haven't accumulated before. To illustrate, these projects train their patience and concentration, which equips them with the necessary skills needed for the success of individuals. This makes youngsters have a strong desire to take part in charity work to help poorer people.
From my perspective, this issue will bring many positive aspects to both the young generation and the society. Initially with the young generation, these charitable projects provide them with golden chances to widen their social relationship and foster vital soft skills involving solving problems or conflict management. On top of that, it is obvious that the communities can greatly benefit from this tendency. For example, people from the impoverished countries can save a great deal of money due to supporting work of kind people. Therefore, all this humanitarian efforts raise people's standard of living and recover economy as well.
Taking everything into consideration, there are two prominent reasons leading to this issue which is humanity and purposes of gaming rewarding experience and both youngsters and the communities can all take advantages from that. I honestly hope that the youth should take part in these projects in order to make their life more meaningful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, honestly, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53134328358 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95727955037 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8518082788 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.533333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324238288024 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100148150657 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717398491623 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200423425661 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945305504251 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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