Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is argued that celebrating an international sports event is beneficial to the host country, while others believe that it is deleterious. In my opinion, I believe it is not good for a country when hosting an international sports event.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why people would be enthusiastic if their country hosted a major event such as the Olympic Games or the World Cup Football match. First, people's health is improved and promoted, especially the young. They look into the athletes like their heroes and want to be strong and flexible like them. The athletes will be taken as a model. Second, it would be a boost for the economy. For example, a country that hosts the Olympics will see a significant increase in the number of tourists coming. It takes a popular event like this to attract the tourists and also advertise their country.
On the other hand, some disadvantages will be stated here. First, the residents will feel uncomfortable when many people come and break the silence. Because of the noise, they can be easily distracted when they try to do something. Second, a worldwide sports event usually costs a million or trillion dollars. As a result, the authorities will waste a lot of money on it. With that money, it is more helpful when to spend on hospitals and education to improve the life of the population. Last but not least, more and more trash will be released into the environment and make them worse. For example, more plastic will be used and many trees will be cut down to pave the wave for building new places for tourists.
In conclusion, there are many opinions about hosting an international sports event. However, I believe that a country that celebrates a worldwide sports event will have more drawbacks than advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83061889251 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67266175973 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6829865125 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0526315789 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250679651316 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831445494437 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923470792731 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188717292964 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867826910746 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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