International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Are the problems that International travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring ?
Currently, it is true that growth of the International travel industry could bring benefits to both the travellers and host countries. From my point of view, advantages of an international tourism such as boosting finance,and improving psychological effect as well as expanding outlook, prevail over its insignificant disadvantages.
On the one hand, traveling to other countries might benefits not only travelers but also hosts. Firstly, when people go overseas from other part of the world,they can communicate with locals who are ordinary or workers of some organisations and they might enhance mindset together with outlook. Travelers could learn far much things from a country where they visit. Secondly, locals may also benefit from the visit of tourists. To illustrate, the great number of visitors coould purchase gifts, products, and souvenirs from local markers. It is beneficial for finance of host country economy. Moreover, tourists might exchange cultures and learn some new traditions.
On the other hand, trips to other nations may have some unwanted consequences. One of the issues of going abroad is confusing cultures between visitors and locals because locals may try to adapt new cultures which they learn from foreign visitors and then it can result in cultural invasion. In addition, travellers visit beautiful places like parks, centre of the city or historical places and they can throw some litters namely cans, pockets, bottles and other objects to there or beaches, it leads to pollute the air and it is a bit harmful for the environment of host country.
By way of conclusion, despite the small drawbacks of traveling to other nations, it is more useful to visitors and hosts than it could harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, in addition, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84580634208 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4953916994 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163004910568 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553107085542 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662216310696 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107701488329 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804209206547 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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