Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
First, work is a part of life, and its complexity has a significant effect on life's complexity. In this regard, it is necessary to say, if young people want to manage their life complexity, it is essential to manage the complexity of their work, which does not happen without planning and organizing. In other words, the world is dynamic, and we see continuous changes in the world that affect jobs and other things. In the modern era, employees should learn more and more about the new skills and knowledge related to their job, so they have more activities to do than in the past. Also, in the modern time, the competition between businesses raises, so all businesses need to work more and more to provide good services or products for their customers to keep alive in the business contest, which causes the managers to push their staff under pressure to work more and better. Therefore, young men are new employees and have to do more activities and learn more things, so they should learn abilities about planning and organizing because working in the modern time needs this.
Second, in modern life, most of life's aspects change significantly, and people have many activities to do. For example, in the past, most family members lived and worked together, so they did not need to allocate a specific time for visiting each other, but today, there are few families living in this way. Therefore, today, people should allocate a separate time for contacting their family. Another example, in the past, most jobs were related to physical activities, and people did not seriously need sports or exercise for their health. In contrast, in modern life, most jobs are in offices, and people should sit down or stand in one place for hours. Therefore, exercises are unavoidable activities for anyone who wants to care about their health. Finally, there are other examples that I can use to show that people have more activities to do because of modern life, and the young people, who live in the modern time, should learn the abilities related to planning and organizing to handle their life activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...orld that affect jobs and other things. In the modern era, employees should learn ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87709497207 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49220250227 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477653631285 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3859728366 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.307692308 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225731612662 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961802464981 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784636903552 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187850460066 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044390993682 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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