Many people tend to support the idea that claim it is much better for individual if they realize the taugh situation such as lack of money or unpleasant job and take them for granted, but others believe that they should do their best for alteration these conditions. Following essay disscusses both notion and then I will give my own perspectives.
Acceptance of bad circumstances such as hated job or minimal salary has merits and drowbacks. The main reason why people do not change these kind of situations is enormous scare about future. These people think that if they leave their current job they may find them without source of money. As consequence they waste their life in unsatisfactory job. There are plenty of negative sides being in such condition. Firstly, person, who works on disliked place or area, without any doubt, will be without motivation. Secondly, people without any desire to work will not be good at job, which can lead to big problems for company, where he works. Last but not least, it goes without saying, that human who unsatisfied with job, tend to react on people aggresively.
However, people could be more in profit if they try to change their live condition. Despite that there are many troubles with finding appropriate job it is much more better for people to do something instead of being in the same place or job, especially if this job does not satisfied them. First of all, by doing research on the areas, which offer job, the could find something which satisfy them mentally and materially. Secondly, people who managed to escape from their unpleasant job feel better, their desire to work experince gradual increase. As well as this, if they can find dream job they would be extremelly good at this area. As a consequence people would get big income.
From my point of viev, people should never stand on the work that hurt them mentally, because being in this kind of condition reduce their productivity and eliminate will to work their job.
In conclusion, despite that many people do not change their life because of big scare about future, there are others who can do it and gain much more profits and their life will change in a good way.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...he main reason why people do not change these kind of situations is enormous scare about f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... may find them without source of money. As consequence they waste their life in un...
^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...with finding appropriate job it is much more better for people to do something instead of b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...or job, especially if this job does not satisfied them. First of all, by doing research o...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... would be extremelly good at this area. As a consequence people would get big inco...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79419525066 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44283862422 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506596306069 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3329026685 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199623404632 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703989179023 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501772845823 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114174906299 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793796465205 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...he main reason why people do not change these kind of situations is enormous scare about f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... may find them without source of money. As consequence they waste their life in un...
^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...with finding appropriate job it is much more better for people to do something instead of b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...or job, especially if this job does not satisfied them. First of all, by doing research o...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... would be extremelly good at this area. As a consequence people would get big inco...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79419525066 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44283862422 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506596306069 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3329026685 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199623404632 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703989179023 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501772845823 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114174906299 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793796465205 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.