the chart below shows the average spending on cloths per person in US in 1985 1995 and 2005
The bar graph illustrates the changes in the expenditure on clothes for four different categories including boys, girls, men, and the women in three distinct years in the US. Units are measured in dollars.
Overall, women are spending a huge amount of money on clothes when compared to the other three groups, whereas boys spend the least amount in all the given years. Moreover, expenditure on women's clothes increased in 2005 by over 600 dollars which is the highest among the four groups.
In terms of boy's and girl's clothes, the amount spent was below 200 dollars in all three years. However, in 2005 spending on girl's clothes rose to over 100 dollars when compared to boy's clothes with below 100 dollars.
On the other hand, the amount of money paid out for men's clothes was around 300 dollars in 1985 in contrast to women's clothes with 500 dollars. While, after ten years the expenditure exceeded over 400 dollars for both genders. Furthermore, US men reduced the amount of money on clothes in the last year by 400 dollars while women spent the highest amount in 2005.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79679144385 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29231571031 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502673796791 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7064994787 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177188672558 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781776759034 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562681346157 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114737468121 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326355091226 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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