It is often practiced in some countries to offer capital punishment for certain kinds of offenses. While some people are opposed to these views and claim this would be a negative attitude to humans. This essay agree with the statement argue that human life is worthwhile and that no one has any right to kill someone at any cost.
The death penalty is often practiced in many countries due to the extravagance of the crime. Therefore criminals could get aware and they got a chance to get rid of many crimes which lead to death. For instance, people who are attempting child abuse, rape, murder as well as terrorism would reduce in terms of such punishments. offenders may get fear of death and which may lead to a reduction of crime. Moreover, many criminals are doing the same or worst crime even after they escape from jail, practicing capital punishment would reduce this.
Nevertheless, people or government could not have the right to kill anyone whether it is a great culprit. countries that practice the death penalty do not have enough records of the considerable reduction in particular crimes. Similarly, providing good education and strict practice of moral views might mitigate the crime than the death penalty. It is good to provide a further chance to the people who committed a crime may feel guilt and the reality often help them to be a better person in later life. Furthermore, this punishment extremely devastating for the families not only the victims but also the criminals to some extent. For example, an incident in India demonstrated that the victim's family who gives an excuse to the person who killed the father of the family is now the caretaker and well-wisher of them when he released from jail.
To sum up, capital punishment is a common practice in some countries. In my perception, avoiding such penalties would be good for the person and the families to some extent as we are humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in particular, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85151515152 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6066331295 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524242424242 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1223465918 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195072873391 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766378902701 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769296862629 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122033720388 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255046666234 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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