In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
it is true that people tend to live alone or in a nuclear family instead of in large, extended family groups. Although there are advantages of the trend, I believe that it is a negative trend.
living alone or in a nuclear family could have several benefits. The main advantage is more private time. living with a large group of relatives, chances are that we need to have meals together frequently. this occupies our own time which we might spend with our friends or alone. What’s more, living alone or with a nuclear family, we only need to purchase a small apartment or a studio. But when it comes to extended family groups, buying a villa is necessary and this does put stress on young people without a strong financial muscle.
Despite the above advantages, I believe living with large family members is much more advisable. In the same living place, family members could look after each other better. The children will not feel lonely and are able to have fun with their peers. Also, many scientists have claimed that it is easier for children who are brought up with other children to understand share and have a prospectus career. In addition, the elderly relatives can help young adults to babysit their children and at the same time, the old are able to kill time.
In conclusion, while living in a large and extended family have some advantage, I believe that it is a negative trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75609756098 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38104529435 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544715447154 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5859695021 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5714285714 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292253548252 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108113649801 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919738707572 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224620278318 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902230889517 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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