Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
In this day and age, more and more people are becoming homeless in some major cities. This trend is mainly due to the rise of the house and the instability in the national economy. However, there are a number of measures that can be implemented to resolve this problem.
To begin with, there are many reasons which result in the rise in the number of homeless people. Firstly, It is clear that some people cannot afford their own accommodation as house prices have soared beyond their means and they have fewer options in choosing a place to live, which is easy for them to be homelessness. According to a recent study, more and more houses are considered unaffordable. Secondly, with the situation of the world in this day and age, some countries in the world struggle with economic matters, which makes some people not only become unemployed but also find it easier to live in the street. For instance, some elderly people in Taiwan are living in the station because of the dive in the economy there.
However, there are many solutions to this phenomenon. First, some governments need to have some programs for low-income people and the unemployed to possess a free or affordable house. For instance, there is a program for some poor people in Ha Noi to buy cheap houses. Secondly, some countries need to have some programs for helping low-income people increase their income, which means that they can live in a safer place than the previous place. As a result, the issue from being homeless will be reduced day by day.
In conclusion, the unaffordable price of houses and the dive in the national economy are the main reason for homelessness. Only when having some affordable houses and creating some job opportunities for poor people, will this situation be remedied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80921052632 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65547538404 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460526315789 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1430319466 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983305010772 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456124550142 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483484352193 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826868569887 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638773370998 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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