Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
It goes without saying that internet is one of the greatest invention in twenty first century and it is significantly improving day by day. Today, internet is generally accepted as a fast communication medium thus,some people believe it can makes the world smaller by reducing the communication gap among us. To a some extent, I agree with the statement because, it can generally be observed that, limited number of drawbacks of the internet are usually overcome by it's advantages in the terms of communication.
There are different opinions among people about the usage and side effects of the internet. While people dwell on their ideas, I would like to bring forward my opinion to better side. Depending on the facts, half a percent of world population doesn't have an access to internet. Thus, limited number of people around the world are getting opportunity to experience the internet whether it delivers negative or positive outcomes. This trend is commonly seen in developed nations such as USA, Australia,as well as Europe.It has been reported that, to a some extent, internet is responsible for increasing criticism and break-up relationships in those countries.
On the other hand, Internet has been dramatically change communication patterns around the world. Nowadays, internet is considerably sustained with various demanding methods and tools of communication such as, social networks, Skype, E-mails and internet calling. Those technologies are helpful in bringing people together by providing world wide access with an internet. The latest social media technologies such as Facebook and twitter allow their users to share their photos and videos with in a matter of second.In addition security that provide by the internet is also useful when transferring confidential information through the network. Thus, internet is a widely use for business activities perhaps, people pay their charges on-line to buy products then the purchased good would be deliver to the door in the next morning.
To sum up, the reinforced facts would displays the role of the internet in today's society. It is almost terminated the most difficult era of communication. which is clearly an opportunity to the people who live far from their families and now they can see and talk each other in a live environment. Yes, the world is suddenly become smaller with internet.
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Sentence: Today, internet is generally accepted as a fast communication medium thus,some people believe it can makes the world smaller by reducing the communication gap among us.
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Sentence: To sum up, the reinforced facts would displays the role of the internet in today's society.
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