The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
Given is the map depicting the change of the museum and surrounding in two years, 1990 and 2010.
It is perceptible that in 20 years everything had changed, except the natural scenery. Two main areas, the east and west, were expanded.
When it came to the museum in the 1990s, there were some small details in the large garden which was in the north and there was a big long path in the middle of this area leading to another room. Moving to the east, there was a large campus stretching to the end of southeast and separated by a small passageway which had car parking between some small details and the garden. Nearby, the main road was stretched from east to west. With a large area with a cottage which was next to the main road, there was a small shop in the right corner of the west and many offices were still empty. There was an emergency exit between rows with a mini shop and store room area.
On the other hand, the museum in 2010 had a big change in the east and west when the both were increased in area so that the path was shrunk. The east had a fully expanded car park. Besides, the western area had been changed into a new shirt zone, the cottage was completely replaced by a cafe and the small shop was expanded to double. Except for that, everything hasn't changed for around 20 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...big long path in the middle of this area leading to another room. Moving to the e...
^^
Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
... to double. Except for that, everything hasnt changed for around 20 years.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, still, except for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31300813008 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10352794065 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491869918699 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5523548473 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4166666667 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124819398516 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518080099918 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801465079594 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107518223178 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109793869849 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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