Some people believe that a home country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions diverge on whether overseas students will bring benefits to their country. Although some formidably censure this sentiment, I am in opposition owing to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, the movement to study abroad can leap the needs of those who want a high level of education. The underprivileged students always make an effort in learning day by day to have a better living condition. Once the emigrating students have a higher salary and they can have economic autonomy, from there other people will take it as a motivation to study.
Further and even more prominently, well-trained and skilled labor resources can boost the economy. Most of them have large and extensive sources of knowledge thanks to a methodical way applied in international prestigious universities in advanced educational systems. Therefore, when they return to their home countries, they seem to be promising human resources to develop the country. In addition, remittance is also another factor for the thriving economy. The reason is the international students work their way through university in a nail salon or a restaurant as part time workers to send money back to their family. Consequently, this amount of money flows to the source country, which flourishes the economy.
By way of conclusion, overseas learning can be viewed in a positive light to the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can boost the economy. Most of them have large and extensive sources of knowledge...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...n to their home countries, they seem to be promising human resources to develop the country....
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Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...sity in a nail salon or a restaurant as part time workers to send money back to their fam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27649769585 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01039842425 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3190213489 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112244639386 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036978167376 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408437852171 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674890644754 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574750217068 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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