Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert to the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, it seems more trendy to travel to areas with extremely harsh conditions than familiar places. While this tendency has many merits for visitors, I believe that there are various drawbacks for them.
On the one hand, there is no denying that tourists can gain a variety of benefits from visiting these places. First, people will have an opportunity to acquire more specialist knowledge that they are less able to get in other popular destinations with high-story complexes or warmly cozy beaches. To avoid the likelihood of potentia accidents or damage in those special places, tourists must be carefully trained with specific information such as safety guides or survival skills. Furthermore, travelers are more likely to gain confidence and fulfillment after overcoming this difficult trip in these places. For example, they will be full of pride if they manage to climb to the top of the Everest Mountains.
On the other hand, it should be noted that traveling to areas with difficult conditions can have some negative aspects. As those places, such as the Sahra desert or the Antarctic, have unexpected dangers, visitors with a lack of knowledge and skills can struggle with challenging situations. For example, they could be victims of a drinkable water shortage if they get lost in deserts. Another detrimental side is that people are able to suffer from health problems when they travel to remote lands. It seems that there are many unknown and serious pathogens in these distant places, which can make people weaker after those trips.
In conclusion, when it comes to traveling to harsh and difficult places, people can experience drawbacks such as potential dangers and sickness, regardless of the benefits of knowledge and confidence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22614840989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67460589857 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1610467461 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156412015802 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556897180351 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038510150858 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994543537848 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360528281257 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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