"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station’s coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.”
The memorandum from the bussiness of a television station has benn provided. This says that ther is decline in the number of viewers of the televison station's program and the reson for this is provided as the devoted time to national news rather than the to the weather and local news. Following this there is a decline in revenue and the cutoff of the advertisement deals from the local bussiness. Based on these, there is a recommendation to increase the revenue generation by reversing the program and providing more time for local and weather news. But this whole idea or the passage is full of asspumtion only without any relevant comaprative and supportive data.
Firstly, the aruger goes on to say that there is signifcant increase in the nation level news time period and less for the local and weather news, but by how much the difference is not provided. This lacking information will make generalization weak and assumption only. Then again, there goes the lack of data for another flaw where most of the complains from the viewers is mentioned. Here, the most means by what amount is not mentioned: so it can be few or many can not be justified.
Secondly, is the concern of the information provided for the local coverage of weather and local news: this news regarding the respective filed might not be fully belived or might be specific locality bounded which will create a dispute over the viewers and the television sation. Due to this, there is also the cutoff of agreement among the various local bussiness and the television station for the advertisement, but the thsi might be due to the various reason also like due to the lack of the budget of local bussiness to do so or might be due to lack of need to do so. Hence, agian this passage is full of lacuyna only.
Thirdly, the generalization has been made to increase the revenue by restoring the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level, However doing so the revenue will be back at the top can not be generalized; as various other key factor come to play in such as the viewers might have changed their prespective and begain to belive another rival television channels; same goes for the local bussisness. Hence, this whole passgae provided but the arguer is rife with the flaws only and can not be correctly interpreated unless sufficient relevant information is provided.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mentioned. Here, the most means by what amount is not mentioned: so it can be fe...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can not be justified. Secondly, is the concern of the information provided for ...
^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can not be generalized; as various other key factor come to play in such as the v...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 412.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64307237987 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45145631068 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1805916229 57.8364921388 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.785714286 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 23.324526521 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.70786347227 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253807826739 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971646465677 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109487761542 0.0701772020484 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17345389559 0.128457276422 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614381368512 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.3799401198 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mentioned. Here, the most means by what amount is not mentioned: so it can be fe...
^^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can not be justified. Secondly, is the concern of the information provided for ...
^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can not be generalized; as various other key factor come to play in such as the v...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 412.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64307237987 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45145631068 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1805916229 57.8364921388 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.785714286 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 23.324526521 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.70786347227 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253807826739 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971646465677 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109487761542 0.0701772020484 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17345389559 0.128457276422 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614381368512 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.3799401198 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.