A pet food company recalled 4 million pounds of pet food in response to complaints that pets that had consumed the food experienced vomiting, lethargy, and other signs of illness. After the recall, the pet food company tested samples from the recalled food and determined that all chemicals found in the food were chemicals that are approved for use in pet food. Thus, the recalled food was not responsible for these symptoms, and the company should not devote further resources to the investigation.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The pet food company had been accused of the selling the unsuitable formulated food items for the pet recently as mentioned by the author of the argument. But a cogent case to support this is missing as various illness such as vomiting, lethargy etc. might happen due to other reasons also not entirely only by the food items. Hence, this argument is full of assumption and not bold enough to prove the food as the reason behind the illness.
Firstly, we do not know from whom exactly the complaints are being made. As these complaints might be from those people who want to destroy the company reputation and penetrate the market in order to bolster their own food items and market. By doing so the original value of the industry might get low eventually facing loss.so, unless the complaints made by the people are made sure that it is from authentic consumers, argument can not be backed.
Secondly, the author implies that these food has caused vomiting and other health related problems in the house animals. however, the reason behind illness could be other reasons such as lack of proper care and housing for them . The pet owner might not have been able to provide a good environment for these breed specific animals to accommodated the condition. As a result, there is also a high possibility of getting affected by the diseases and flu which ultimately might be the reason for the ill health. so, again this proves the failure of the argument.
Finally, the reason behind the sickness could also be from the food that have been provided other than the companies food. Home made food that might be stall or even the waste food might also came in contact with animals. Water source might also could be polluted that might have triggered the illness. In summary the given argument falls short in many aspects. the argument advocates for the guilty of pet food company for providing wrongly composed food that might had triggered whole scenario of illness, however it is not significant enough.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 345 350
No. of Characters: 1625 1500
No. of Different Words: 171 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.31 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.71 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.268 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.758 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.396 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.396 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ems and market. By doing so the original value of the industry might get low even...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...ed. Secondly, the author implies that these food has caused vomiting and other health re...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... related problems in the house animals. however, the reason behind illness could be oth...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lack of proper care and housing for them . The pet owner might not have been able ...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...might be the reason for the ill health. so, again this proves the failure of the a...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
... that have been provided other than the companies food. Home made food that might be stal...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ater source might also could be polluted that might have triggered the illness. I...
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Line 4, column 364, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...n argument falls short in many aspects. the argument advocates for the guilty of pe...
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Line 4, column 457, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pany for providing wrongly composed food that might had triggered whole scenario ...
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Line 4, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., however it is not significant enough.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 345.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8115942029 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34854289162 2.78398813304 84% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524637681159 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2009867887 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6470588235 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.70786347227 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296438093666 0.218282227539 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104131033124 0.0743258471296 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106532376586 0.0701772020484 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201734408287 0.128457276422 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100754683923 0.0628817314937 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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