The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There has been a colossal upsurge in prodigies discussing the topic of people’s concern about the decline in health standards in the following years. Noticeably, there are more and more alarming trends that affect adversely to people’s physical and an increase in horrendous diseases in this modern age. Personally, I agree with the above statement and will analyze my justifiable opinion in the following essay.
First and foremost, the air contamination and noise pollution index is increasing gradually day by day due to the tremendous number of car ownership. It is evident that traffic congestion is more ubiquitous these days, which can lead to some heinous illnesses such as respiratory ailments, asthma, etc. Secondly, because of the hectic schedule from work, people in the present day have a tendency for consuming the available food instead of making homemade food. Consequently, there is a rocketed growth in the quantity of people who involve in obesity, diabetes, etc. Thirdly, the fee for healthcare service is becoming more pricey, which limit the chance for low-income people to afford them.
Considering the different negative influences on our development in the technology-driven era, it is conspicuous that a major number of people regardless of age, sex, etc spend most of their time sitting in front of the computer screen in order to deal with the deadline from work and study. This can result in poor eyesight in inhabitants and even establish a sedentary lifestyle in society. Moreover, the characteristic of a career requires people to shoulder more pressure, which may rocket tension in our life and sometimes cause a harmful effect on our psychological and physical health. However, thanks to advanced technology, medical equipment, and hospital are invested more in order to take care of people’s health. Needless to say, there are numerous methods and programs that advise people to live healthier and keep their fitness. To illustrate, people nowadays can do exercises at home by practicing based on the instructions on youtube or other websites. It is surprising that a range of vaccines are invented to ameliorate our immune systems.
In conclusion, it is all stated that industrialization can affect both sides of our physical and mental health. Although there is a range of improvements in the medical field, the habit and environment of modern era still impact negatively to our health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 788, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
... are numerous methods and programs that advise people to live healthier and keep their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28092783505 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00675343405 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7532119242 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.529411765 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142865021654 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427252257038 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307105956653 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085390835185 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491914886826 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.