The government is spending a lot of money discovering other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problem of the public. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
The world has definitely shaken up since the first human was able to walked on the moon which has led to a new era of space exploration. The government is on their way to find other planets which is controversial action. I personally believe this action is beneficial but it is not affordable and taxing for many countries that need to be focused more on the problem of the public.
On the one hand, the heavy investment of the developed countries such as America, France, etc in the effort of discovering other planets has shown certain results. Firstly, knowledge about the universe has been expanded; such as the origin of the universe, the liveable percentage of other planets, the way this galaxy works, etc. Secondly, numerous researches showed that there is a possibility the Earth could no longer be sustainable for humans one day. Still, there is no guarantee that the government’s time is well worth the effort.
On the other hand, it can also be argued that the government should use the resources more wisely to fix many pressing problems. Poverty, malnourished children, homeless people, and lack of education are still much needed to be solved even in developed countries. For developing countries or less-developed countries, modern technologies, and materials to develop cosmology are luxurious and less likely to be first priority.
In conclusion, exploring other planets can bring out certain advantages but it is easily comprehensible why the government should completely concentrate more on securing a future for their people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18253968254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97170031657 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1645035772 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130533968163 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532259719039 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049959455513 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841581307504 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265035467594 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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