Nowadays people depend on technology for leisure activities. Is this a positive or negative development?
There has been a colossal upsurge in discussing the topic of the reliance of people on advanced technology for their leisure activities at the present day. In spite of the convenient and useful features that come from cutting-edge technology, I personally content that is more detrimental. In this essay, I will cite some appropriate points about this issue before my justifiable conclusion is reached.
In the midst of the computer-driven era, it is apparent that this development has had a huge impact on people’s pastime activities. First and foremost, instead of executing outside activities, modern people have a vocation for sitting in front of the computer screen and doing more desk jobs. These negative habits could degrade our eyesight and heinous diseases such as obesity, and cardiovascular ailments,.. even lead to a sedentary lifestyle. Secondly, due to the multifunction of technology, everything could be done with a few clicks. It is evident that this trend might convert people to become couch potatoes and deter our creativity and application. Thirdly, children and youngsters might lose the meaning of life because they don’t spend time exploring the outside world and lack knowledge related to leisure activities. To illustrate, according to BBC newspaper, people in the present day are less flexible and active than in the previous era because of this reliance.
Considering the diverse effect of this trend, thanks to advanced technology, people could have more time to savor and enjoy more paradigms of free-time activities. It is undoubted that people make use of the electronic commercial to go shopping online and have a chance to choose a variety of items. People are no longer hanging outside, which means we could limit some thorny problems such as the high level of carbon footprints, traffic congestion, etc. Moreover, varied entertaining models from bleeding-edge technology might foster people’s development and even help people save their money for a rainy day. To cite an example, instead of splashing our money to call and message our beloved ones in our spare time, we could take advantage of virtual apps such as zalo, messenger, etc in order to make video-call with our relatives and friends without any fee.
In conclusion, two sides associated with everything: one affirmative and one negative point. It all comes down that modern technology is beneficial for humans whereas it still exists some setbacks. Although the prodigious advantages we could gain from this trend, I wholeheartedly opine that the cost related health issues and potential of harming interpersonal relationships that we need to pay outweighs the merits we can get.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my justifiable conclusion is reached. In the midst of the computer-driven era, i...
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Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... as obesity, and cardiovascular ailments,.. even lead to a sedentary lifestyle. Se...
^^
Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...as obesity, and cardiovascular ailments,.. even lead to a sedentary lifestyle. Sec...
^^
Line 2, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...obesity, and cardiovascular ailments,.. even lead to a sedentary lifestyle. Secondly...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30444964871 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95725850424 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59718969555 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0389124 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.210526316 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247807069025 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070305695477 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641587860143 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149941108119 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449351710687 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my justifiable conclusion is reached. In the midst of the computer-driven era, i...
^^
Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... as obesity, and cardiovascular ailments,.. even lead to a sedentary lifestyle. Se...
^^
Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...as obesity, and cardiovascular ailments,.. even lead to a sedentary lifestyle. Sec...
^^
Line 2, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...obesity, and cardiovascular ailments,.. even lead to a sedentary lifestyle. Secondly...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30444964871 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95725850424 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59718969555 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0389124 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.210526316 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247807069025 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070305695477 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641587860143 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149941108119 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449351710687 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.