What are you want to do in the future ? what is your dreams ? Why can you do it ?
Everyone has either dreams or jobs in life that they will pursue. Each person has one or more passions, gifts, or hobbies that they want to get their heart set on in the future. When I was a high school student, I was asked by my friends about my future jobs which I wanted to do in the future. I had given it some thought and decided to learn graphic design. That's why I had decided on my dream to become a digital painter and designer. I have wanted to create plenty of content by drawing on the computer.
I looked back on myself as a student in primary school, I was unable to seek my passion or my aspirations. In the foreseeable future, I had to think about what I wanted to do. However, I had already seen a ton of images of various artists on the internet and on social media. Additionally, I watched a lot of YouTube videos regarding digital painting tutorials. That not only became my motivation but also helped me get endless inspiration. Besides, I thought about my life when I was a digital painter, I could use my drawing skills to build my own universe and do whatever I want in it. Furthermore, I could also invent fictional characters with different characteristics. Because I can imagine any scenario where I was drawn to colorful objects, this could help me burst my off creative thinking. While I have created pictures and works, I feel very chilled out and spellbound. I might seek for myself in the job that I did. That was what I found intriguing and fascinating and that's why I want to pursue a career in the future.
To be able to be a digital painter, I need to try my best to gear up for my dream every day because improving my skills is more critically important. First of all, I have to set a goal to pursue the goals. When I have a nice plan for my dream, it can help me know what I must do the next time to achieve my goals. For example, I will spend one to two hours learning to draw skills and the software to help me design and create on the computer. That I can catch up with my dream faster when my range plan is set clearly. Secondly, you can have experience seeing the pictures of many famous artists all over the world, you can get experience in learning about it. I always pursue many artists and watch new projects which are being updated every day. Not only that can help me improve my mindset about my major but also stimulate my creativity. I will have more ideas when I am watched and learned about their works. Last but not least, not only my drawing skills and use of software are improved but also I need to develop my design thinking. I can make my work quickly If I am a master of design skills. But, you can not have a nice project when you don't have great ideas. I must read a lot of books about design. Likewise, I should look at everything around me and try to take quick notes when I have ideas. That can help me fulfill my dreams in the soonest time.
All in all, passion is most important, I need to be serious about my dreams and try to keep up with my goals. Being a digital painter is so hard for me to pursue. Although those professions have challenges, I will never give up. Every day, I try to become a better artist and have a great world of my own. I am sure I will become a good designer if I make an effort to learn to design and draw. Like, people used to say that "On the way to success, there is no trace of lazy men."
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ht and decided to learn graphic design. Thats why I had decided on my dream to become...
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Line 3, column 982, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... I found intriguing and fascinating and thats why I want to pursue a career in the fu...
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Line 5, column 1151, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ou can not have a nice project when you dont have great ideas. I must read a lot of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 106.0 24.0651302605 440% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 41.998997996 200% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2755.0 1615.20841683 171% => OK
No of words: 653.0 315.596192385 207% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21898928025 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05508305356 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4289977877 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 176.041082164 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444104134763 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 882.0 506.74238477 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 34.0 5.43587174349 625% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 16.0721442886 236% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7663380568 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1842105263 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 8.67935871743 265% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171133161148 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440126602629 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670589593195 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105747360862 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542304126733 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ht and decided to learn graphic design. Thats why I had decided on my dream to become...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 982, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... I found intriguing and fascinating and thats why I want to pursue a career in the fu...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1151, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ou can not have a nice project when you dont have great ideas. I must read a lot of ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 106.0 24.0651302605 440% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 41.998997996 200% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2755.0 1615.20841683 171% => OK
No of words: 653.0 315.596192385 207% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21898928025 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05508305356 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4289977877 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 176.041082164 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444104134763 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 882.0 506.74238477 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 34.0 5.43587174349 625% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 16.0721442886 236% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7663380568 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1842105263 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 8.67935871743 265% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171133161148 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440126602629 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670589593195 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105747360862 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542304126733 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.