Some people think that studying literature from the past is a waste of time for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To begin, literature is a significant subject for students. More specifically, teenagers can acquire numerous information from famous poems or novels such as its plot or vocabulary, hence reading these books might help student to obtain valuable knowledge and several interesting facts about it. For instance, the poem called “ Dong Chi “, which was written by poet Chinh Huu, tells us the story about the condition of Vietnamese soldiers when they were waiting for enemies in the dark . Therefore, students can be empathetic with soldiers and understand how miserable they have to suffer.
On the other hand, studying literature is not necessary for particular students. Since a number of Vietnamese schools nowadays allow students to choose their favourite subjects to learn, hence for those who make a choice of studying math, science and physics may only have to acquire the basic skills and knowledge of literature. To be more specific, teenagers, who see the world with a logical brain, do not fit subjects such as literature or history. Therefore, they can spend most of the time on researching their main subjects and developing it to a high level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15343915344 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77194092825 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6849318534 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165477159215 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742539387843 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347064883931 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128976253972 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372109906448 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.