In the recommendation from a personnel director to the president of Acme Plublishing company, he states that that the employees of Acme would benefit by enrolling for the Easy Read Course. He suggests that opting for the course would increase the productivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employees of the Acme company for only 500$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. However these assumptions hold water and can only be true if the following three questions are answered.
Firstly, Does the graduate from the course who read 500 page report in two hours lack speedy reading? In other words, did that graduate had not develpoed few skiils of reading in early life before opting in for the course? It can be possible that the graduate who read 500 page report in two hpours already skilled enough to read such. Perhaps, there is a possibility that the graduate already has read the report beforehand and was just reading it again. It is also possible that whatever he read, he did not understand the report. However, if any of these prove to be true than the argument cannot be counted viable.
Secondly, What is the evidence that other graduate who became vice president within a year from assistant manager got levelled up due to opting for this course? It is possible that his work would be more valued rather than his reading. Perhaps, his work and his reputation with the boss would be a possibility for his promotion. Also, it might be the possibility that the graduate work's has nothing to do with reading and it might be just his desk job where he had to test softwares or design buildings. However, if any of the stated assumptions are true, then the recommendation is weakened.
Additionally, what are the companies that are stating that easy speed reading- reading course increased their productivity? It is possible that the company has nothing to do with reading in their job profile. Also, there is no evidence which states that that the faster reading can make the day at work more productive. It is possible that the company's employees are highly paid and are already more productive compared to others. If any of these assumptions holds place then the prompt is weakened.
In conclusion, the assumptions made by the director in above arguments as it states is flawed. The assumption made by the director personnel to the president of Acme company should answer to these questions and provide evidence to evaluate the vitality of the argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... of Acme Plublishing company, he states that that the employees of Acme would benefit by ...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would increase the productivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employee...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employees of the Acme company for only ...
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Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employees of the Acme company for only ...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$500'.
Suggestion: $500
... employees of the Acme company for only 500$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. H...
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Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'seminar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'seminars'.
Suggestion: seminars
... Acme company for only 500$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. However these assumpt...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. However these assumptions hold water and can on...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...Also, there is no evidence which states that that the faster reading can make the day at ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ady more productive compared to others. If any of these assumptions holds place th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89099526066 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67819481683 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443127962085 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7653574354 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0521573029288 0.243740707755 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176953066415 0.0831039109588 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315897634989 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324958478832 0.150359130593 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295450087868 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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