Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities

Throughout history contribution of young people to their communities has played an important role
Throughout history the contribution of young people to their communities has played an important role

for their society which belong to.
for their societies which belong to.

The study conduct that
The study conducts that

such as promoting level of culture and solve society's problems.
such as promoting level of culture and solving society's problems.

Sentence: However, others people may take opposite point and believe that their contribution is more effective than the past.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and people

Sentence: The study was done among 50 sociologists in whole country who have broadened research studies about young people activities from the past until now.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and activities

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 452 350
No. of Characters: 2259 1500
No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.611 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.998 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.622 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.116 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.533 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5