Some people could be naturally good leaders. Others believe that people can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A multitude of people reckons that leaders are naturally born whilst others believe that people can learn leadership skills and advance them over time. From my point of view, I find myself in full accord with the idea that bosses have some innate personalities but some characteristics required to be leaders need to be studied.
On the one hand, it is discernibly understandable why a plethora of people advocate the former statement. Obviously, each individual is born with various talents and it has been noticeable since the Stone Age that some people show up their leadership skills at an early age. Napoleon Bornapat, one of the greatest generals in the world of all time, is a typical instance. It can be read through history books that the leadership skills of Napoleon had been noticed since he was a child by his parents, friends and educators. Through years and years, due to the fact that the vast majority of bosses have shown up their abilities when they were little, people have, therefore, made up a sheer thought that managing possibility is naturally gifted.
On the other hand, a barrage of people holds the strong claim that managing skills could be developed. In this contemporary era, numerous skills could be educated through universe, organization, experiences and lifetime as long as people have potent desires and sheer diligence to overcome the gamut of challenges on their life path. Despite the de-apparent elucidated evidence, history has gone by multiple successful leaders that had long-lasting training, overcome disadvantages of low self-esteem the lack of public speaking skills and the like. Anastasia Mendes, who made a name for herself for being one of the most talented and extraordinary directors in the world, is a figurative example. As far as many people may know, Ana was born with innate dyslexia and a shy personality. People had been on claiming her to be invaluable in the tobe but she proved the contrary. It was a milestone when her mother sent her to a so-called Managing skill for children organization and made a major shift in her entire life. Through the knowledge was taught and arduous experience, she later became one of the most legendary fuglemen in the world, out of the nickname ' shy nerd" was being called by friends. She now manages a massive chain of cosmetic shops worldwide.
In summary, besides that natural leadership, managing skills could be trained through experience as well as education
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...glemen in the world, out of the nickname shy nerd' was being called by frien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, in summary, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06862745098 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8186700764 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563725490196 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3938342817 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.647058824 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320217999727 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101660068328 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978081202712 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223413620454 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09713803179 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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