Young people who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adults. Agree or disagree?
There are some policymakers and reformers arguing that young and adult offenders should be treated equally. In my opinion, despite the ostensible equitability of this policy, it omits critical psychological factors.
Those who advocate the equal treatment of all ages, point out that this will engender/ create an immensely deterring impact. The main objective that all individuals are punished is not solely for justice but as a means to prevent the events of future re-offending from ex-criminals. At an early age, youngsters are taught at schools about the consequences of committing a crime that breaking the laws will be punishable and might receive the death penalty. Thus, if these condemnations are overlooked, then chances are young people will attempt to violate the laws, even if the rates of juveniles committing criminal behaviour are at the lowest in human history
Nevertheless, age is solely an extenuating circumstance. While youngsters might not grow mature enough to grasp their actions that might lead to delinquency, adults who become law-breakers have had more time to develop socially and intellectually. For example, it is not uncommon for young people now to be influenced by extremist, negative online influencers, particularly on social media, such as Tiktok and Facebook. It is the nature of young minds that are impressionable and susceptible to these circumstances, and thus, they often lack the knowledge and maturity to protect their safety. This vulnerability goes beyond affecting their emotional and psychological development and justifies laws that secure young people from receiving capital punishment.
To conclude, there are justifiable reasons to uphold equal penalties for all ages; this proposal would be unfair to youngsters. Judges or courts should take into account a range of elements before announcing a particular punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, thus, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5818815331 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1310764473 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644599303136 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0986572848 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211716970319 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693587876791 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676300264019 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11853779058 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422726005019 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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