In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing.
What problems is this causing?
What measures could be taken to counter this situation?
Nowadays, some traditional festivals and ceremonial celebrations are now on the brink of dying out. In my school of thought, such a predicament is caused by the difference in political ideologies of some oppressive states and the effect of a rapid-changing world.
One of the problems concerns the systematic repression of ethnic minorities imposed by an autocratic state. These ethnic groups were forced and abused to change their traditional lifestyles and cultures to mingle with the majority, for example, In Xinjiang, where Uighur culture was cracked down by China, whose policy was a single ‘state-race’. Many ethnic people were arrested and put in camps for practising long-established religious celebrations and being overly religious, resulting in the loss of some unique traditions. Furthermore, as more cultural groups now have more access to the outside world and move out of their hometowns to find food and jobs, it will be hard for them to maintain their old traditions to pass on to the next generations because of the enormous influence of modern lifestyles and globalisation.
International action, individuals, and initiatives promoted by governments worldwide are the best solutions to stop traditional cultures from vanishing. In light of the Uighur event, The United Nations condemned China for its brutality against the Uighur people and took action to put pressure on China to stop the oppression. International communities now defend these groups and can continue practising their traditional customs and religions. Nevertheless, governments in any part of the world can make the most significant change; for instance, states can set up programmes locally or virtually that aim to promote traditional festivals and educate young people on the importance of preserving traditions more appealingly. This happens already in many Universities and schools in Vietnam, where traditional festivals are held for students to wear traditional clothes and celebrate the cultures of ethnic minorities.
In conclusion, the loss of traditional festivals is either caused by a brutal policy of a state or a by-product of globalisation, which threatens and damages the cultural identity of various groups. The action of individuals and governments can tackle this development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59312320917 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28331256175 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3388290271 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.153846154 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172790231735 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651566073536 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431679431571 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114413099542 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238464221942 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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