Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Since ancient era, money is playing significant role in their life. Money is the main component which is using for sale and purchase of any kinds of things, services, etc. Nowadays, capital is epitome of rich people, without it we can not survive in this contemporary world.
Furthermore, people can buy almost everything, to cite an example, education, vacation, home equipment, digital gadgets, health facilities, traveling and many more facilities are only possible with money. Addition to this, from childhood, parents teaching to the children that, if you study properly, you may get good job, also you can earn more money to fulfill your dreams in future.
Moreover, in our society most of people want to become nourish of money, so, they can complete their desire as well as they no need to worry about future when they will become older. In my native country, large number business man, celebrities, sportsman and foremost politician are very rich. They are playing important role in augmenting the economy of country.
It would not be disproportionate if we can without money, no one care as well as respect the person, who don't have more money.
On the hand, some individuals believe that, person should have finite money, so they can fulfill their basic needs to survive. Apart from that, most of younger generation is speculating that if they more money they could have buy all things which they wants.
To recapitulate, I am also in favor of more money. Owing to this, I can purchase those items which I need for spend quality of life. It is inevitable truth that exaggeration of capital must be towards up side not down side. To conclude, I know money is not everything , but without many we can not survive on this earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... earn more money to fulfill your dreams in future. Moreover, in our society most of peop...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ms in future. Moreover, in our society most of people want to become nourish of money, so, th...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...care as well as respect the person, who dont have more money. On the hand, some ind...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bought'.
Suggestion: bought
...that if they more money they could have buy all things which they wants. To recapi...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ey could have buy all things which they wants. To recapitulate, I am also in favor o...
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Line 6, column 213, Rule ID: DOWN_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
... of capital must be towards up side not down side. To conclude, I know money is not every...
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Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...conclude, I know money is not everything , but without many we can not survive on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88851351351 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60637814646 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4002560156 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197660774483 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648718657358 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414685803787 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105475199421 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027310541224 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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