some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot money
how might having a lot of money make people happy?
what other things in life can make people happy?
Nowadays, it is believed that some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. In this essay I would examine the reason way few of human think that money can make happier and how to deal with it before coming solution
In the one hand, there some of reasons, why people want to have huge money. Firstly, nobody else wants to face poverty live, because sometime they cannot buy food or sometime lost their home. As the result, every single person does not to be poor. It is mean they will suffer without money. Secondly, money have effect to person live, it is due to money can buy knowledge. For instance, they can get good education which it is useful to get better live and job in future, so they do not worry concerned problems which have associated with money.
But, the other hand, money is not main way to get cheerful life. There is most important than money, such as relationship and experience. Relationship it is important between friends or family, it is due to when they do it, for instance communication or consultation or hugging when feeling sad, it will be impact to feel heartwarming and more enjoy. Experience is significant too, it is due to they get lot of view or anything, such as they can go to abroad country to take part leisure or doing something challenging.
To sum up that article, money is not the only one thing can make people happy. Other way people can get it such as relationship and experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the reasons') or simply say ''some reasons''.
Suggestion: some of the reasons; some reasons
...coming solution In the one hand, there some of reasons, why people want to have huge money. Fi...
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Line 2, column 462, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...it is useful to get better live and job in future, so they do not worry concerned problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47940074906 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46933812398 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0874672038 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396944384334 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152561266849 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165141667959 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271810711868 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146473555076 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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