The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2012 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart compares the various types of holiday accommodation chosen by people in England, Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland in 2012.
Overall, it can be seen that hotels was the most popular choice among people in the UK. While Caravan and Camping were the least common choice in England, Scotland and Wales, in Northern Ireland, the lowest figure was seen in Self-Catering and Camping.
Looking at the graph for detail, hotels attracted the majority of people living in England and Scotland with over 60% while the figure in Wales and Northern Ireland is roughly 60%. Self-Catering is more favoured in England, Scotland and Wales with almost 30% compared with just around 10% in Ireland.
Turning to other types of dwelling, Caravan is one of the most popular choices in Ireland with over 30% in contrast to the figure in Scotland (12%) and England and Wales was 6 and 8%, respectively. Camping was selected by only 14% of people in Wales, followed by 12% and 11% of those in England and Ireland in the same order. The figure of Scotland citizens choosing Camping registered the lowest figure in all the chart with only 5%.

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Average: 5.9 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to camp'.
Suggestion: To camp
...he figure of Scotland citizens choosing Camping registered the lowest figure in all the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, well, while, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86082474227 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47115896576 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7218861095 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0610380714221 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386250957405 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734067924283 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671948179544 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953774697812 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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