As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Many people believe that businesses should fulfill their duty towards society in addition to generating profit. In my view, I wholeheartedly agree as social responsibility can improve customers’ perception of a brand and can attract more shareholders.
Firstly, businesses undertaking social responsibility initiatives can improve their brand image. The reason behind this is that it builds public trust. By helping the community, by either donating money or volunteering, the company gains trust from its customers. According to a Cone Communication study, 87% of interviewed consumers would be willing to buy a product or service provided by a company that advocates concerning a social matter. As a result, in the long term, the company will become more and more popular and its brand image would be more prestigious and valuable in customers’ minds.
Secondly, taking community development into account might be attractive to investors or funds. Recently, sustainable investment is one of the most important criteria that financial investors are looking for when considering investing money into a company.This is because industrialization has resulted in many environmental issues such as: air pollution, sweat-box phenomenon, plastic waste or unemployment. This concern is perfectly exemplified in the case of Green Joy, as known as a grass straw manufacturing start up from Shark Tank Vietnam. The founder of this firm successfully raised over 4 billion VND in exchange for 33 percent of her company from Shark Lien who seriously cares about the environment.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I maintain that business should not only focus on generating revenue but also take action for the community's sake. It is advisable that companies can allocate a part of their profit to support local charity or use more eco-friendly material in manufacturing products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55326460481 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25900768154 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4469581089 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965686366108 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330587700395 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422944263725 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652828098609 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453811446816 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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