You have borrowed money from your bank You agreed to repay a fixed amount every month However it will be difficult to pay any money back this month Write an email to the bank in about 150 200 words Your email should do the following things State the amoun

Dear Sir/Mam,
I am requesting you to please allow me to pay this month's installment next month, and I hope you will concur with my request.
Your bank granted me a loan of five lakh rupees which was required to be paid in seven installments on monthly basis. I borrowed the money for my house renovation from your bank. Moreover, I planned my expenses accordingly to pay installments without any trouble, however, the emergency medical expense that came up on my head affected my current monthly budget.
Recently, I got sick and stayed in the hospital for two-weeks. Plus, my medical insurance got expired and I forgot to renew it. As a result, I paid the hospital bill which was more than half of my month's salary that I was using for paying my installments of bank loan.
Therefore, I urge you to please wait till next month and accept a delay in paying my last installment. Once my next month's salary will credit to my bank account, I will immediately pay my last installment at your online portal.
I hope you will consider my request and will not put a fine on delaying the payment for my last installment.
Regards,
Shwatank

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
...ting you to please allow me to pay this months installment next month, and I hope you ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, moreover, therefore, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64851485149 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69325585405 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7787951587 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200543014757 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896939165577 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730977744576 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130279084537 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057707183538 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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