The four pie charts compare the age distribution in the populations of Yemen and Italy in the years 2000 and 2050.
It can be seen that the average age in both countries is predicted to increase over the period, and Italy appears to have an older population. The proportion of those
between 15 and 59 years old in Yemen is expected to grow, whereas the corresponding proportion in Italy will decrease significantly.
In 2000, 14-year-olds and under accounted for half of Yemen’s population in comparison with only 14.3% in Italy. Meanwhile, people aged 15 to 59 represented 46.3%
and 61.6% in Yemen and Italy respectively. In Yemen, the proportion of older residents was 3.6%, compared with 24.1% in Italy.
In 2050, it is predicted that the figure for the 60+ group in Italy will almost double to approximately 42% of the total population, whereas the figure in Yemen will climb marginally, reaching 5.7%. That of the 15-59 group in Italy is forecasted to drop by about 15% to 46.2% in contrast to a growth of almost 11% to 57.3% in Yemen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80110497238 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86366973954 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558011049724 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6256768887 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205538180534 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994075012414 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717072793726 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117304822808 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739115222836 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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