Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Nowadays, people's life have changed alot, so that their thinking has changed too. Especially is about their love and the time to have children. Now, people common to get married and have babies when they thirties. But in the past, they usually get marry and have babies when they are twenties. This action is really good in some case but also there still bad essences.
To begin with this change, due to the fact, now more and more people decide to have lover but they won't get marry or have babies until they older and have good income and balance finance or just because they fell that they didn't old enought or didn't have enought aptitude to get marry and have babies or also in some case they don't want to have their own family when they are twenties bacauae they still want to be freedom and don't need to take care about others.
In my opinion, this way is really good because it will make people get less stressful bacause when they thirties, they will be more mature so they can control thier life easier so their family life will be more comfortable and their finance will be better at that time so they can work and their babies will have better life. But in the other hand, I think when they get marry to late, it will be harder to get babies and it make the difference between parents and child bigger and it will be harder for parent to update new things like their child so it make their point of view be difference so much.
In conclusion, this life is really good but it also bring us some accident about point of view between parents, and children but when parent can update the news and kids may know about their parents, maybe there aren't any accident and they will fell very good and comfortable with this life style.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40372670807 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.88509060955 2.80592935109 67% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431677018634 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.623130565 49.4020404114 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.555555556 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7777777778 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318801270304 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166039840604 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078724343993 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216973022002 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704866331839 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.