Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree?
it is argued that government should spend more money on develop roads and motorways rather than spend on public transports system. I totally disagree with this notion as in the same amount of money, invest in public transport system is bring more effective.
to begin with, i consider that spend money on roads, motorways or public transport system both to solve the problem ò traffic jam. nowaday, to improve or broaden a route, the gorvement need to spend a very large amount of money. More specially, they have to waste money to construction and persuading people to move to another places. For instance, to widen and improve one of the biggest and most important road in Ha Noi city, goverment had stopped working for about 3 months, make causing a serious decrease in the state budget, about 12 million USD. And in case of spend that money on public transport system, the gorvement not only solve the traffic jam problem, but also did not have to waste 12 milion dollars.
Further more, if improved public transport system, they can get more attention from urban people. To be more specific, it could bring several positive affects. Firstly, when people tend to use public transport rather than personal vehical which means that number of vehical participate in traffic significantly deacrease . Secondly, the amount of toxic emissons released into air also deacrese to so that we can both solve the traffic jams problem and air pollution in many country. to illustrate, japan is the country where public transport system the most modern in the world, japanese don't have to use their own transport and the researched in 2014 said that despite being an industrialized country, the rate of air pollution in urban in Japan is always among the lowest in the region.
in conclusion, i firmly maintain that spend money on upgrade public transport system is more inteligent. It is advisible that Viet Nam should follow step of Japan to make the inhabit's life much better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92492492492 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50993222257 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4338939924 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353385041207 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136688871969 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110143898195 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240466899198 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884439564926 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.