Some people believe that no one should do the same job for all their working life. Others argue that doing the same job brings advantages for individuals, companies, and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There have been opposing views concern job. while some people claim that no one can just work only one job for their whole life, other opine that doing a same job whole life bring several positive for people, companies and society. in my opinion, both ideas are correct to a certain extent.
One one hand, all of the companies nowadays tend to give professional training cource to wokers from middle, which means from 30-50 rather than young gểnation. Young people tend to change their job and company very frequetly not only because they want to find the job which the most suitable for them but because thay chảnge job many times to find new enjoyment and emotional. this will be bring several benefit for them, firstly, they can gain experemence and knowledge, seconly, they would find more enthusiam in working so that working more effective. for instance, If in your application it is stated that you have gone through a lot of physical and mental work, you will get more attention from the employer.
On the other hand, Elderly and long-term workers always get more trust because the company cam recognised that you are someone who will devote all their energy to the company and the money and time they spend to train you is totally worth. When they have many pressure to earn money, make living to take care of their family, they definitely choose the work bring them stable income, for them leaving company and trying a new job is a chllenge and it can cause harmful effects to their life and family.
in addition, Some companies also have a pension scheme for long-time contributors, it remarkables term with everyone to balance.
In conclusion, while it is fair to argue that jumping between jobs can help individuals broaden their skill and experimence, working in one position constantly can have numerous positive effects on both the employees and the employers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8691588785 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38257683875 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8385297283 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.090909091 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38231447658 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134312927456 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106140096011 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206773192377 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133951528015 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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