Some people believe that no one should do the same job for all their working life. Others argue that doing the same job brings advantages for individuals, companies, and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a persuasive argument that individual should not keep following only one career in their life, while it is also evident that the same job has great personal and general influences, I am of the opinion that one’s career should be various and changed.
On the one hand, working is to acquire experience and knowledge, so that staying at the same mindset of a job can not assist these purposes. With regard to this, individuals should apply for a new job when necessary by virtue of the job satisfaction. A case in point, when the work is fatigue and tedious, it leads to the poor work performance and decline in work productivity. In addition, people tend not to devote a great deal of time for just an intention. To some extent, the change of work might enable them to explore new opportunities for life. It is not just about making ends meet but also the work-life balance.
On the flip side, there are some favourable effects of staying at the same job. In the first instance, people have high level of work experience and become experts in their own fields. This may help individuals to fulfil their long-term financial goals and to be financial stability. A long the lines, more chances of advancement are provided when people working loyally for companies. With respect to the enterprises and the society, it keeps the work force to be adequate which demonstrates that the general economy might develop and boost the life standard of citizens.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that doing only a job impacts people, manufactures and the society positively, I believe that it is better to make alternations to jobs in one’s working life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79790940767 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70751213428 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6744515162 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372097682715 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118208513633 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643117298566 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221244597616 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327748785971 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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