Many people are currently proposing a solution to solve problems in the local area: have young people do volunteer, unpaid work to help people in their neighborhood. Although there are some drawbacks to this policy, I believe it is generally beneficial to society.
There are various benefits to this mandatory volunteer work. Firstly, it will help young people develop a sense of responsibility and community. By helping out people who they are familiar with growing up, they will feel more thankful and personally connected with their neighborhood. Secondly, through unpaid volunteer work, young people can significantly alleviate social problems and improve the quality of life in their community. Younger people nowadays are more open-minded and creative, which means when they channel these strengths into solving local problems, new solutions will arise. For example, many have developed group chats on social media to create an exercise-buddy program, encouraging people to do more physical activities.
However, there are still some disadvantages associated with this policy. The first drawback is that this year of voluntary work will be an interruption in their studies or their work. Many students can easily forget knowledge learned after just a few months of not continuing their studies, let alone a year. The second drawback is that if this policy is mandatory, it can pose a stressor to the younger generation. For example, many already have multiple responsibilities to tend to, like taking care of their siblings, working for their families, or struggling to study or find a job. Adding yet another one will cause them to carry out the volunteer work carelessly. Some may even publicly object to it, thinking that they are stripped of their freedom.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that this policy carries some disadvantages, especially for people in underdeveloped areas. However, I think that if it is encouraged, rather than mandated, it is generally advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40064102564 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97751925113 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5024659527 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350039092192 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10655165007 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933292669165 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223561466079 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109618113664 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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