The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfalland temperature for one region of East Africa.
The line graph and bar chart give information about the temperature and rainfall in a monthly basis for one area of east africa.
Overall, there was a decrease in the temperature of this region, with July witnessing the dramatic fall. In addition, the amount of rain in April had the highest figure over the period shown.
Regarding the temperature, it started at over 22 degree in January, after which it underwent a moderate increase to 24 degree in March and a pronounced downturn to 20.5 degree in july. A similar trend was recorded in the statistics of remaining months, which remarkably rose from 21.5 degree in august to 23.5 degree in october, before ending the period at 22 degree.
As regards to the rainfall, the data of January was at 25 millimeters, followed by a significant growth to 280 millimeters in April and a substantial drop to 10 millimeters in july. Likewise, the precipitation of october experienced a marked upturn by 170 millimeters, with a subsequent decline to 160 millimeters in december.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...perature and rainfall in a monthly basis for one area of east africa. Overall, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, as regards, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95348837209 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00630309546 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0355593054 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143755512707 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746094677403 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149704123896 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124076327753 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180508918236 0.0819641961636 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.