Many people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others claim that zoos have a positive impact. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Most of the people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others say that zoos have a positive effect. I strongly agree with the statement that zoos should be open as many people get a chance to learn about different types of creatures from the zoo. Zoos should not be closed because people will not be practically able to visualize the things they studied or hear.
As we know that, many people think about the danger that may happen if the zoo is not properly managed. They also believe that everything will be given on the internet as everybody has smartphones. So, they say that going to the zoo is just a waste of money and time and the risk may occur. For example, instead of going to the zoo, people can utilize time and money for other purposes.
Now, as is already mentioned that people will get a chance to see various types of creatures that including the endangered species too which are protected in the zoo. Though some of people think about money and time; it can be managed easily if we believe that visiting the zoo gives us many advantages. We can see the example that people who visits the zoo, have much more knowledge about the creatures as compared to those who watch in the internet.
Hence, people will be known about various plants and animals by observing them from near. Most of the endangered species will be preserved. Seeing these benefits, the establishment of zoos should be encouraged rather than closing it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
... which are protected in the zoo. Though some of people think about money and time; it can be m...
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be encouraged rather than closing it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33250906145 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527131782946 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1793455762 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39032785603 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15517584394 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116051735838 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251840990778 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122991410528 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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