Why do students prefer doing part-time jobs during their studies? Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages.
In modern scenario, participating in part-time jobs by the most of the youngsters during their study time has become a popular trend. I will discuss the reasons about this phenomeon and some merits in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there can be manifold causes which demonstrate that why students like to do work during their school and college time. The first and foremost, majority of young people face barriers of financially burden because their parents do not have batter income sources and jobs. Aside from it, many children have much free time and they want to become responsible as well as independent in their life. For example, there are some working places: restaurants, cafes and so on food places which are preferred by the students during their study time in order to earn money and for other purposes. Hence, these are reasons which show that why children give more preference to part-time jobs.
On the other hand, there can be distinct benefits for children who work in their free time with their study. The primary benefit is that if they utilize their time in part time jobs then they will be able to earn money in order to fulfill their basic needs. last but not least, they have batter opportunities to explore life with themselves with gaining knowledge of work experience. For instance, a survey was conducted by the Australian Government, which indicated that students who visit in the Australia, they had succeed to maintain their life due to working in their leisure time. Consequently, these benefits play a significant role in learner lives of doing work while their study time.
To recapitulate, although, few reasons influence students working in part-time jobs. Yet, it has a positive development for them in many ways which i have described in the body paragraphs.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd so on food places which are preferred by the students during their study time ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...t is that if they utilize their time in part time jobs then they will be able to earn mon...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
... in order to fulfill their basic needs. last but not least, they have batter opportu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...ts who visit in the Australia, they had succeed to maintain their life due to working i...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...ts who visit in the Australia, they had succeed to maintain their life due to working i...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01324503311 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59379550034 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.379113854 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315970073123 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114402080233 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075918728092 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189295046687 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838612063667 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd so on food places which are preferred by the students during their study time ...
^^
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...t is that if they utilize their time in part time jobs then they will be able to earn mon...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
... in order to fulfill their basic needs. last but not least, they have batter opportu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...ts who visit in the Australia, they had succeed to maintain their life due to working i...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...ts who visit in the Australia, they had succeed to maintain their life due to working i...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01324503311 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59379550034 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.379113854 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315970073123 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114402080233 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075918728092 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189295046687 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838612063667 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.