Lacking of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?
Nowadays, many discussion are heard regarding to the growing serious problems in clean water scarcity all around the world. There must be significant measures to be taken globally to overcome through this problem.
Fresh water shortage effects many server problems on agriculture and industrial accepts in the world. Firstly, with lack of fresh water farmers would not be able to cultivate healthy corps reguarly. This could resut in huge numbers in the death of animals. Secondly, insufficient water, mineralls exploiters, food suppliers, manufacturers and electricity distributors face difficulties to operate their business. Therefore, water shortage had a direct impact on the economic sector of the country.
Rainwater harvesting is the main factor to deal with water shortage in the aeras where groundwater factors can improve efficiently. Nowadays, huge building in the urban areas are coming up with the rainwater harvesting methods for prcerving water dunning monsoon period and resuing them in various different ways rest of the year. However, many people in the rural areas facing clean water density problems regularly. Many charity clubs offers hep to solve problems by constructing wells and tring some improvments agriculture systems by proving them more equipments.The developed countries those having a higher level of technology can help improving shortage of clean water problem.
In conclusion, the fresh clean water scarcity is the anworing to the global world and thus effective solutions must be made soon for protecting the water resources.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun discussion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many discussions'.
Suggestion: many discussions
Nowadays, many discussion are heard regarding to the growing seri...
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Line 4, column 419, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun charity seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many charities'.
Suggestion: Many charities
...clean water density problems regularly. Many charity clubs offers hep to solve problems by c...
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Line 4, column 568, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...systems by proving them more equipments.The developed countries those having a high...
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Line 4, column 643, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
...g a higher level of technology can help improving shortage of clean water problem. In...
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Line 6, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon for protecting the water resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64135021097 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83386660015 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637130801688 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2743774337 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281410999182 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110056902535 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835502147741 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183777566686 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682626523934 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun discussion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many discussions'.
Suggestion: many discussions
Nowadays, many discussion are heard regarding to the growing seri...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 419, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun charity seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many charities'.
Suggestion: Many charities
...clean water density problems regularly. Many charity clubs offers hep to solve problems by c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 568, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...systems by proving them more equipments.The developed countries those having a high...
^^^
Line 4, column 643, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
...g a higher level of technology can help improving shortage of clean water problem. In...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon for protecting the water resources.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64135021097 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83386660015 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637130801688 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2743774337 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281410999182 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110056902535 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835502147741 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183777566686 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682626523934 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.