Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, having the off interval of education between school and university was becoming so common and pupils prefer to rest or work before it. Although it has some advantages like being more prepare to start new courses, doing the half-finished works and earning some money but there is some drawbacks such as difficulty of begin the education again or provoke to leaving the education completely. In this essay pores and cones have been described to testify my conclusion.
The school period is almost lengthy and prolonging it nonstop may be led to annoying the persons and lack of energy and motivation to upcoming new courses. For example, this courses will be taken at least 10 years in most of countries and occasionally follow with an entrance exam for going to university that put a lot of pressure to students. Pausing between school and university can help students to recover themselves in terms of mental and physical abilities to show better performance at the university. This break can be accompanied by taking a job. In this case, in addition to earning some money which help to pay university's fees, a lot experience will be gained either.
On the other hand, it should be noted that starting the education after one year break will be overly unpleasant for some students that experienced relaxed time far away from educational atmosphere. It can be drastically difficult for some of them that earn money to cover their whim. In the worst case, they may be tempted to resign entirely after the rest time.
Overall, it appears to me the benefits of take a year off between school and university are stronger argument rather than disadvantages. However, the mentioned drawbacks may be occurred just for few students and it is not general.
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- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds Do you agree or disagree about his opinion 56
- Some students take a year off between school and university to work or to travel Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds Do you agree or disagree about his opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some drawbacks'?
Suggestion: there are some drawbacks
...nished works and earning some money but there is some drawbacks such as difficulty of begin the educati...
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Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...rses will be taken at least 10 years in most of countries and occasionally follow with an entranc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, at least, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94256756757 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72823873851 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4880465965 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290454185208 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966263961647 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680151786843 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178178613207 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665919436311 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.