Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The past two decades have seen an unprecedented rise in technology that humanity has ever seen. From the development of simple but need an application like cellular phones to robots and drones that can travel in space. Though the rise of technology primarily aims at improving a person’s state of living, it is undeniable that it brings a whole array of complexity to the table.
To start with, with the dawn of technology came the rise of social media. Social media though initially created to connect people across the world has now evolved into a living and breathing entity dictating how people’s life, livelihood, and social life plays out. To illustrate this clearly let’s take a scenario that can be observed in social media, Let’s say there are two people X and Y. X has an opinion that coincides with the majority of the audience of the platform whereas has the Y person has a diametric view on the same topic which doesn’t go along with the general audience. Though Y must be allowed to be entitled of his opinion is still bastardized for his opinion to a point where his livelihood and personal life are affected. This example clearly shows how it is tough to navigate through social media which undoubtedly adds a layer of complexity to every person’s life.
Despite the previous argument, people would counter-argue that there are more development and economic growth seen in the last few decades due to the rise of new technology. which though true, but at what cost? If losing basic human rights and decency is what is required to have a better economy and development then, we humans have not taken a step forward but a step backward in the aspect of development. Technology should complement humanity’s social behaviours not help the triple one another.
ergo, to reiterate, technology in spite of helping in making human life easier has bought with it a culture that brings forth more complications than we initially signed up for.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ades due to the rise of new technology. which though true, but at what cost? If losin...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ergo
...ours not help the triple one another. ergo, to reiterate, technology in spite of h...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, whereas, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89520958084 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71029533703 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1907879248 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10238764434 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372880985229 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305621926158 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633984398859 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03027380622 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ades due to the rise of new technology. which though true, but at what cost? If losin...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ergo
...ours not help the triple one another. ergo, to reiterate, technology in spite of h...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, whereas, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89520958084 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71029533703 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1907879248 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10238764434 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372880985229 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305621926158 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633984398859 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03027380622 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.