Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train.
In your letter
• give the details of your train trip
• describe the luggage you left on the train
• say what actions you want him/her to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to a lost leather suitcase which I had forgotten during my trip from Nursultan to Almaty city on Wednesday night.
It was a one-way trip with departure at 8 p.m. from Nursultan railway station, short stop between and arrival at 5 a.m. at Almaty-2 station.
Unfortunately, when the train arrived, I was sleeping. That is why I was a bit absent-minded and forgot my suitcase with important documents. To be exact, it is a black, middle sized, leather suitcase with a floral print in the left-upper corner of it.
Could you please check if someone has found it? If it is the case and you keep it in your storage, could you please give me a call to +77775082843
Would you be so kind as to explain what procedure you have in order to withdraw a lost item?
Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.
Sincerely yours,
Maria V.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65408805031 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7026614258 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9129501918 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2222222222 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247575078648 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856124643611 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781993556377 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117012270046 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664501576077 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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