Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
It is true that nowadays parents spend a huge amounts of sum on buying a plethora of toys for their kids. At first glance, it seems to have many advantages, while on deeper dive there is a downside to it. Both the sides of it will be discussed in this essay.
One of the key benefits in buying many games for kids is that they serve an educational purpose. It helps in stimulating different parts of the brain, additionally triggers creative thinking.For instance, games like scrabble help kids improve vocabulary and lexical resource. Moreover, playing with games can instil a healthy spirit, teach competitiveness, that can aid them have better attitude in life. Nowadays, parents have become too much involved with their work and busy schedule, they don’t spend much time with their kids, as a result of which, out of guilt they buy a lots of toys.
Despite of the positive arguments, there are certain drawbacks. With a large number of toys, kids will spend playing them indoor, due to which they tend to become introverts. They loose important skills like working as a team, sharing and leadership qualities. In addition, there is a possibility that children might not be able to concentrate on one single game, as they have a many tempting options around them. Furthermore, all of the toys are made up of plastic and fibre which are hazardous when small kids put them in their mouth and suck it.
In conclusion, there appears to be both upside and downside of having too many toys, however there appears to be a lot of bad effects on the children, hence it is necessary that parents need to monitor the kind and quantity of toys and not over do it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72508591065 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58791407819 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8250433706 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244567475946 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719601156038 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647242924032 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135498080169 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212467327973 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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